TLC by Chrouya
Script: PhotoKano 05 [mdai]
Workraw: PhotoKano 05 (480p)

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{"Doddodo dodoudo dodoudo dodou."}{not sure if this is supposed to be onomatopoeia of something -alta}{http://www.aozora.gr.jp/cards/000081/files/462_15405.html , couldn't find an existing English translation online -alta}{doesn't really have any purpose, just random like tune for a song/poem}
Dum dum di dum di dum dum.
{I think you can paraphrase it like this. It is an onomatopoeia; The Kaze no Matasaburo has a pecular way of using onomatopoeia, actually}


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"It only had one classroom, and the students weren't all third-year students;
{I find it hard to correct this one: the context is that normally schools go up to three years, but this one isn't.}
{my broken english: "It only had one classroom, and the students didn't go until third-year;"}

9
"But it did have a sports field, a tennis court,
"The sports ground was limited to a tennis court,
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right behind it there was a grassy hill with a chestnut tree on it."
but right behind it there was a beautiful grassy hill with a chestnut tree on it."
{the "mo" shows they're still referring to how small it actually is,  (they would have been two instances if the "mo" was a "to")}
{the grassy hill is the comparison, which is the larger part of it, hence taking the "but" in this line}
{I also missed kirei na}

19
For me it was when I found Niimi Haruka crouching in the hallway.
{I'm missing the TL for "coincidentally" but I'm leaving it here as a mere note}

38
Am I stupid or what, trying to pick her up like that?
{\i1}Am I stupid or what, trying to pick her up like that?{\i0}
{thoughts}

47
But I need to go...
But if I don't go...
{something bad will happen. That's how she's saying it}

55
He'd even photograph a sick person?
{lit version: Who the hell would photograph a sick person?!}
{Hmm, would an interrobang work in this one?}

78
Just let me know whenever you want to photograph me.{tell me whenever you want to shoot me.}{leaving this as shoot just feels so weird.... I don't want to shoot her!  but I'll totally photograph her!}
{I totally had my laughs here}

85
I'm happy about her feelings,{could go with "Her feelings bring me joy, but I think what's here is okay}
{The context of this line is about that he's happy that she's all totes with photographing her, but he isn't confident in his own self}
{I'm happy she's so open with me <-- liberal suggestion}

87
Above all else, I want to stay pure.{Nothing is going to stain me,}{tlc, these three lines please, I don't really have much idea}
Confidence that I will stay pure; {lit. not get soiled by something}
88
I won't let anything change that.{ nothing at all,}
confidence that I will keep to my determination; {lit. not be unwavered by something}
89
Not even something like my {self}pride.{no self-confident pride.}{yeah, im not sure on this one entirely as well}
confidence to be proud in something.
{nanimono ni mo [verb] jishin (ga nai): Confidence that... above anything else}
{these are all sorts of confidence that he's lacking}

98
Of course, if he were a bit cooler... you know, like {\i1}him{\i0}?
Of course, if he were a bit cooler, I'd think twice, but right now...?
{arejyaane, is still part of this line (the "but right now... he's no go" kinda context)}

103
She'd go for someone more hunky, right?
Normally you'd go for someone more hunky right?
{general hypothesis}
{conbine it with 104...It's the same speaker}

105
I wonder if our magazines are okay.
I guess he can keep the magazines for a while longer.
{The context is that they actually want them back, but now that he's in that depression, they drop pushing him for a while}

113
You have a childhood friend?
A childhood friend, was it.
{he remembered what the girls said}

114
You spend a lot of time with someone from your class?
I heard you spend a lot of time with a guy from your class.
{datte --> I heard that}

115
Maeda-kun?
You're talking about Maeda-kun?
{what she's saying literally}

142
I can'{this is kinda stupid... feels forced, being this whole "arc"}{missing line}
I can't figure out your true feelings...
{lit. can't see your heart}

143
{missing}
Idiot!

145
Is Nii-yan here?
Nii-yan, here you are.
{it's not a question. ita: == is here. But liberally speaking, this would be "found you"}

151
No, and she's really strict about her attendance.
Nope, recently she's been taking days off actually.
{mistranslation: yasumigachi means tend to take days off}

152
Sometimes she comes even when she's sick,
Whenever she comes, she's not motivated at all,
{mistranslation, genki ga nai  = not energetic != sick}
{I liberalised this}

153
but she's not there today and we haven't heard from her.
and today she's didn't even come, without leaving a message.
{idem as above to make the sentences flow}

193
If I don't, I won't have any friends...
So just treat me as an odd one out.
{she just wants to play football with you, dammit!}

260
And Dattsun, his expression is...
Dattsun is written all over your face.
{this is the correct context}

263
You know him better than I do.
Even though you know him better than I do.
{missed the TL of kuse ni}

SIGNS
{00:18}
{「風の又三郎」}「Matasaburo of the Wind」{Could leave this as Kaze no Matasaburo - as it's a name}
==> Matasaburo of the Wind
{this is a common translated title as I google'd ahead}

{10:10}
行雲流水
Like flowing clouds and waters.
{I guess this is a style/motto} {commonly used in the context : natural and smooth writing}

宛先: (names)
==>
To: Nakagawa Itta, Azuma Takashi
	Uchida Yuuki, Kurebayashi Katsumi
	Narita Ruu, Sanehara Hikari

{...名}Topic
==> 件名 == Subject


{20:43}
{there are also other texts}
゛ンカン  ==> Thick-head
根性なし! ==> Wuss! {yes, she wrote down the wrong kanji, dammit}


{想いはるかに}As Far As We Want
==> Feelings in the distant.
{this has a negative connotation}